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Audience- Web audience/christian laymen, pastor, or Bible student doing research on the Internet.
Goal- Application article on the Ten Commandments in under 6,000 words.
Accomplishments- My website gets lots of emails and lots of reports of people that are being helped by the content. Lately I have not been able to keep up with the volume. Refining content is a priority for me and writing well a motto.
Challenges- I have had people complain that I write too academic and too technical for the average person. This article I have tried to write not as detailed and technical. Did I succeed?
My latest article is here. Let me in on any suggestions/improvements, thanks..
http://www.cerm.info/bible_studies/Exegetical/ten_command.html
John
Goal- Application article on the Ten Commandments in under 6,000 words.
Accomplishments- My website gets lots of emails and lots of reports of people that are being helped by the content. Lately I have not been able to keep up with the volume. Refining content is a priority for me and writing well a motto.
Challenges- I have had people complain that I write too academic and too technical for the average person. This article I have tried to write not as detailed and technical. Did I succeed?
My latest article is here. Let me in on any suggestions/improvements, thanks..
http://www.cerm.info/bible_studies/Exegetical/ten_command.html
John
John, I found it concise, readable, and helpful. If I were writing it, I might include a paragraph or two on the prologue: “Then God spoke all these words: I am the LORD your God, who brought you out of the land of Egypt, out of the place of slavery.”
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Cor meum tibi offero Domine prompte et sincere. ~ John Calvin
Thank you Charlie. Did you see many grammar/spelling errors?
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