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By jwolf6589 Thu, 03/10/2011 - 6:12am
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Audience- Web audience/christian laymen, pastor, or Bible student doing research on the Internet.

Goal- Application article on the Ten Commandments in under 6,000 words.

Accomplishments- My website gets lots of emails and lots of reports of people that are being helped by the content. Lately I have not been able to keep up with the volume. Refining content is a priority for me and writing well a motto.

Challenges- I have had people complain that I write too academic and too technical for the average person. This article I have tried to write not as detailed and technical. Did I succeed?

My latest article is here. Let me in on any suggestions/improvements, thanks..

http://www.cerm.info/bible_studies/Exegetical/ten_command.html

John

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Good

John, I found it concise, readable, and helpful. If I were writing it, I might include a paragraph or two on the prologue: "Then God spoke all these words: I am the LORD your God, who brought you out of the land of Egypt, out of the place of slavery."

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Thank you Charlie. Did you

Thank you Charlie. Did you see many grammar/spelling errors?

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